Some people think that there will be decrease in international travel in future. Do you think the less amount of international travel is a positive or negative development ?
Nowadays, tourism plays a consequential part in every one's life; however, some urge that in future, there will be curb in international travel. In my opinion, the fewer amount of international travel leads to a negative development because tourism brings myriad of benefits to a nation.
At the outset, the less amount of tourism will bring ripple consequences because there will be no exchange of culture and tradition as well as person will not annex his or her knowledge. With the help of international travel Peoples are able to transfer gulf cultures of different nations. For instance, in India because of tourism citizen of country accepted western culture which is followed by European but if it reduced then spreading of the culture will not take place. In order to expand their knowledge people travel of one country to another, whilst to get familiar with that places. For example, from China to England, folks are traveling to know their language, which is going to be an international language in future, due to which they do not have to face any difficulties; henceforth, if it alleviate then plethora of problems will be faced by human beings.
Moreover, persons are having hectic schedule by the reason of which international travel is burgeoning. Nevertheless, in future amount of work will not curtail on an account of which tourism will proliferate, if international travel mitigate then mankind will not be able to visit various places like, Taj Mahal, Disney world and so on. Owing to which they will not get any opportunity to rejuvenate themselves. To cite an example, in Tata company work load is boost-up due to which they are not able to do effective work and they are facing health woe which stands as paragon.
In conclusion, in future person is traveling less then have to face difficulties in life and will have shutdown development on nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99681528662 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83543421867 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535031847134 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7590924324 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.75 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329096971316 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133426185413 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741255846234 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218282236222 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072770990614 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.