Task 2: Young people are much more aware of and concerned about issues like the environment, poverty, and animal welfare than previous generations. What is your opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Some people are of the opinion that nowadays young generations have understanding and relationship with the matters such as environment, poverty and animal welfare more than older people. Personally, I believe that the idea is correct with many reasons.
Firstly, with the help of modern technology, young people can conduct research themselves about those concerned issues. For example, they can use computers to search information about environment, poverty and animal welfare, whereas, their parents or grandparents did not have opportunities to access this technology. Through internet, youths ...
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Sentence: Firstly, with the help of modern technology, young people can conduct research themselves about those concerned issues.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by a pronoun, plural, reflexive
Suggestion: Refer to research and themselves
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 278 350
No. of Characters: 1555 1500
No. of Different Words: 163 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.091 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.554 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.725 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 125 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 94 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 62 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.452 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.714 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.346 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.605 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.066 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5