Dear Rakesh,
Thanks for the letter and I hope you doing well. If you are planning for a family vacation, I can suggest one destination for you. Consider having a trip to New Zealand, it is a beautiful country and has amazing breathtaking views. I have been there back in 2018 and I will summarize my tourism experience with you.
My trip started after landing at Auckland airport. We hired a car for rent and drove to “The Hobbit” place, which is one of the heritage spot and the Hollywood movie “Lord of the Rings” shot here on this location. Later, we traveled to South Island. The most exciting part of our trip is the road journey from Christchurch to Queenstown. It was about 600 KMS drive and took 3 days for us to complete the journey. The entire journey was scenic and will have to drive it through a few alpines as well. Queenstown is called as “Adventures capital of World” and believe me you will not be disappointed. There are tons of adventures activities to try starting from Skydiving, paragliding and what not you could find anything there. I personally recommend you to go for NZONE skydiving, they are the best in town.
We were staying in backpackers motels, which are affordable and we can find them all over New Zealand. In case if you are wondering about the food, there are quite a good number of Indian restaurants to offer mouthwatering food. Do not forget to try NZ famous burger in Queenstown.
Warm Regards
Sudheerkumar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 258.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76356589147 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88295240655 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631782945736 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6202810298 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2941176471 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1764705882 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.705882352941 4.34317383033 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252746537121 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770706170835 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892631208763 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179898226428 0.12726935374 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920224535079 0.0580467560999 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.