You recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived it was damaged.
Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In your letter:
• give details about the order you made
• explain what was wrong with the item
• tell the company what you want them to do about it
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your own addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express dissatisfaction regarding the watch which I ordered recently from your website.
Let me explain you in more detail. I am Tim Frank , platinum member of Ebay.com. I ordered a smart watch from your online shopping platform on 25th December 2019 during New year sale which was held from 20th December 2019 till 1st January 2020 and Invoice number is CXT245SS.
I found that packaging was tampered when it got delivered to me on 31st January 2019. After unboxing, I found screen of the watch was also damaged.
I tried contacting customer representative but they unheeded me. As it is under warranty, I would request you to replace the item and courier it to me as soon as possible. I am also attaching Invoice copy along with this letter for your reference.
I will be waiting for your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Tim Frank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...plain you in more detail. I am Tim Frank , platinum member of Ebay.com. I ordered ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...2020 and Invoice number is CXT245SS. I found that packaging was tampered when ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 752.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88311688312 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.671497532 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688311688312 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6694888297 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.3636363636 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218418859589 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726443485287 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582798019091 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101162836087 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429176880293 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.