You recently moved to a new apartment. Write to your friend and say
- Why did you move there?
- Describe the new apartment
- Invite him/her to visit you
Dear Ram,
How are you buddy? I am writing this letter to make you aware that I have become your neighbor now. Last Sunday, I shifted my residence in your colony. Building no. 25A directly opposite to your building. This new residence is benefiting me in a number of ways, office distance will be shorter to only 10 minutes walk, close to supermarket as compared with last residence.
The house is 2 floor building painted with orange colored from outside. The ground floor also have garden and parking space at the front, car parking space is covered with shed. The interior design is mind blowing from decoration to furniture, everything sounds perfect.
Why don’t you have a visit at my new house, we can have great time together, it’s been long we had no party and meanwhile you will be able to see this apartment also. Should we plan for next weekend?
Eagerly waiting for your response.
With regards,
Vishal Bhat
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-08-20 | bhatvishal@ | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ram, How are you buddy? I am writing this let...
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Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...car parking space is covered with shed. The interior design is mind blowing from de...
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Line 7, column 172, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... you will be able to see this apartment also. Should we plan for next weekend? Ea...
^^^^
Line 11, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ting for your response. With regards, Vishal Bhat
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89440993789 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42727642555 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.72049689441 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.5120525778 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.6666666667 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4166666667 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.58333333333 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179910505276 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049920295426 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064807958306 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946790517741 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746969538223 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.