The graph shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The Pie chart shows how electricity is used in and average English home
The given line graph illustrates that information about consumption of electricity during winter and summer days in England while the pie charts describe various areas where electricity is being used in English homes.
Overall, it can be noticed that the use of electricity is almost doubled in winter to operate the room and water heaters as compared to summer in England homes.
Regarding the line graph, the usage of electricity remains significantly higher throughout the day in winter as opposed to summer days. More than 35000 units of electricity are consumed in midnight which increased sharply up to 40000 at 3 o'clock and after that, the downward trend has been experienced and the consumption reached at the bottom of 30000 units gradually around 8 o'clock. However, the figure dramatically rises from that point and reached at 48000 which is the highest consumption of the day. On the other hand, the average use of electricity is only 18000 units during the hot summer days in England houses.
According to the pie chart, the greatest demand for electricity is to drive room and water heaters which is accounted for for52.6%. Moreover, the rest half is being used in various other electrical types of electrical equipment such as 17.5% for ovens, kettles, washing and 15% for both category lighting, TV, radio and Vacuum cleaners, food mixers, electric tools.
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| 2019-10-14 | Gaddam Ramya | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...hich increased sharply up to 40000 at 3 oclock and after that, the downward trend has ...
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Suggestion: o'clock
...ottom of 30000 units gradually around 8 oclock. However, the figure dramatically rises...
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Suggestion:
...the hot summer days in England houses. According to the pie chart, the greatest...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es of electrical equipment such as 17.5% for ovens, kettles, washing and 15% for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, regarding, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13333333333 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66546639655 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.1332511679 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.375 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.125 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 5.23603664747 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418203340452 0.215688989381 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188678278863 0.103423049105 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109934460018 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257397175555 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773511057178 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.