You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
● explain why you changed jobs
● describe your new job
● tell him/her your other news.
Dear Jay
I'm writing to let you know that I've joined a new firm last month, and I started working as an industrial pharmacist.
The main reason for the changed job is providing me with a great opportunity to polish my skills and paying a handsome salary. As you know, my pharmacy degree was yet to complete, and multinational companies do not offer jobs to the students. So, I was doing a part-time job in a small private corporation where I was underpaid and doing extra hours. Now I'm graduated and this is an excellent platform to start a career.
My new job is less laborious as compared to the previous one and I'm satisfied with my current job because here I've to supervise the process of dispensing raw materials in the storehouse. and I've to maintain the quality and shelf life of the materials.
What is more, my apartment was far away from the new workplace so I’ve shifted to another house, which is near my office. This place is really mesmerizing because of its beautiful view. I'd recommend that you must pay a visit to my new place.
Keep in touch.
Saira
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I'm
Dear Jay Im writing to let you know that Ive joined...
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Suggestion: I've
...ar Jay Im writing to let you know that Ive joined a new firm last month, and I sta...
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Suggestion: I'm
...as underpaid and doing extra hours. Now Im graduated and this is an excellent plat...
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Suggestion: I'm
...ous as compared to the previous one and Im satisfied with my current job because h...
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Suggestion: I've
...isfied with my current job because here Ive to supervise the process of dispensing ...
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Line 6, column 188, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...ensing raw materials in the storehouse. and Ive to maintain the quality and shelf l...
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Suggestion: I've
...ng raw materials in the storehouse. and Ive to maintain the quality and shelf life ...
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Suggestion: I'd
...merizing because of its beautiful view. Id recommend that you must pay a visit to ...
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Line 8, column 195, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'recommends'.
Suggestion: recommends
...izing because of its beautiful view. Id recommend that you must pay a visit to my new pla...
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Line 8, column 195, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Id) must be used with a third-person verb: 'recommends'.
Suggestion: recommends
...izing because of its beautiful view. Id recommend that you must pay a visit to my new pla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, you know, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61340206186 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69258240357 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639175257732 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.253555634 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3636363636 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163718619508 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057236143416 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468529413433 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105273248712 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316364359344 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.