The best way to make new friends.
1.joining a sports team
2.volunteering in community
3.traveling
Some people think that joining a sports team is a best way to make new friends, while others believe that volunteering in community or traveling is a best way to make new friends.
The three possible choices on the issue may have there own reasons to support their arguments.
If i had to choose one, i would strongly agree that joining a sports team.
To start with, joining a sports team is a great way for us to build strong relationships with others.
This is attributed to the fact that doing a sports with other people offers opportunities for people to learn how to develop relationships through communicating their thoughts and connecting to each other's feelings.
Over the decades, today's rat-race society has been evolving and changing at a surprising speed with such a hectic life style.
Therefore,people are hard-pressed for time and feel depressed or drained by the increasing amount of work.
However,in this context,many of use restore our relationships by joining a sports team together.
This is because doing a sports with other people to tack and share emotions with each other, and develop social, interpersonal, and communicating skills.
Therefore, we can easily socialize with others and become more outgoing or active while joining a sports team.
Thus, this proves that joining a sports team is a best way to make new friends.
All things considered, it is my belief that my argument regarding this topic has been effectively and precisely delivered with the reasons mentioned above.
In conclusion, l firmly believe that my discussion above presents the strong argument for joining a sports team.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 267.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13483146067 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9181246018 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550561797753 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7085536222 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.461538462 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.53405017921 287% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307419384605 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127861491314 0.076458572812 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.184852838935 0.0737576698707 251% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127861491314 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.184852838935 0.0645574589148 286% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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