The bar chart illustrates the trend of downloading various computer packages per week over the periods of five weeks.
Overall, a glimpse of graph indicates that ActiveX was predominantly downloaded package while Net accounted for least number of times it was downloaded.
To begin, ActiveX started from around 80,000 downloads per week followed by Java which was bought only about 40,000 times. After that, purchase of Java escalated consistently until end of timeline while popularity of ActiveX showed a slight drop in week 3. However, it regained its momentum quickly and peaked to 120,000 in week 5.
In terms of Net, a variable pattern can be observed. In comparison with other two, the frequency of Net package usage remained below 40,000 until week 3 where it had declined up to 250,000. However, in week 5 it had exceeded these figures reaching significantly above 40,000 download per week but it still stayed least popular package among all three.
- The diagram below shows how the water cycle works. 56
- Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement? 84
- Violence in the media promote violence in the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- The diagram below shows how the water cycle works. 56
- More and more business and individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 56, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
... a variable pattern can be observed. In comparison with other two, the frequency of Net pa...
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Line 4, column 306, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'stayed the least'.
Suggestion: stayed the least
...e 40,000 download per week but it still stayed least popular package among all three.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12101910828 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6612620526 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.707006369427 0.547539520022 129% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1103172159 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241636025789 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104837658246 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100510709407 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167599118799 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106522183209 0.0819641961636 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.