Many youngsters are encouraged by their parents to get a part-time job during their free time. Do you agree or disagree with this?
Nowadays, the trend that youth work in a half-time job besides their academic studies has become a point of contention between those who support it and those who refuse it. While some caretakers assume that it puts pressure on their youngsters because they have condensed timetables on their schools, I am of the belief that it plays a vital role regarding to their future career and their character. In the following lines, this will be thoroughly discussed.
To embark on, this phenomenon has a benevolent impact on their future career. In other words, it is deemed that if youth work at any causal jobs in their leisure time while they are still studying, this will boost their employability in the labor market after graduation; Moreover, companies' employers will give them a priority over their rivals. For instance, some research studies revealed that this challenge improves youth's multi-tasking abilities, such as studying their subjects, revision the exams, and doing their duties at work. Thus, the more experience they have, the more opportunities to have a lucrative job they get.
After illustrating the first merit, another factor that is worth considering is the significant effect of working on youth's character. Firstly, not only does working shape their personality, but it also helps them to acquire crucial skills and experience. According to an article published in The Guardian, around 80% of students who join the labor market during their free time have more confidence, independence, and self-esteem than their peers. Secondly, young age are able to deal with various situations and take landmark decisions in the field of workplace and in their personal life. This means that this experience enhance their mentality and broaden their horizons.
To conclude, having clarified these benefits, it can be reiterated that parents should promote their youngsters to join various jobs in their leisure time until they find their passion toward their life time career, and I agree with the latter opinion because of the aforementioned reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'youths'' or 'youth's'?
Suggestion: youths'; youth's
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Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...il they find their passion toward their life time career, and I agree with the latter opi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, for instance, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3009118541 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71270763562 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601823708207 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.8970417757 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.153846154 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3076923077 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392746762568 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133927507297 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882602857386 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263822764317 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471037873907 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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