You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes.
Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: say which advertisement you are answering describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about. Explain why you would be a suitable teacher
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest in teacher position you have just advertised on college information board. Please allow me to give more details.
From your notification, the night classes on Friday have such a dearth of instructors and the community college urgently needs to recruit qualified teachers to fulfill the education programs. The nanotechnology course is actually a new field in academic curriculum and so it is necessary to have proper persons who have gained profound experience and knowledge to impart the lessons to students.
I have worked for the world’s foremost company in applied science and nanotechnology is a part my current work in which I have been trained intensely to be an expert. Furthermore, the master degree that I intentionally pursued has recently <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">been</span> granted from national university of sciences. Hence, this would be great to apply my skills and expertise efficacious for education. This, as I am sure you are expecting, is both beneficent and suitable for your college.
Your prompt attention for this application is greatly appreciated.
Haki
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eficent and suitable for your college. Your prompt attention for this applicati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54444444444 4.54256449028 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.65163585869 2.54303337028 144% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.705555555556 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.9036439199 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.888888889 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246544378517 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08744890568 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654366667229 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127783048114 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025865804536 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 8.37731958763 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 70.7449484536 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 8.71597938144 170% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 7.59969072165 131% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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