More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
It is true that an increasing number of people from all four corners of the world are flocking to large metropolises day by day, searching for a more contented life. Although there will be some negative consequences of this trend, governments can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.
Due to several differences between urban areas and rural ones, some related drawbacks can be anticipated. The main issue is the escalating living cost, which is perhaps twice as high in countryside. Inhabitants in cities carry the burden of paying higher prices for housing, transport and even clothes. Furthermore, security is also a warning problem. A wide variety of recent surveys points out that the number of robberies in big cities are increasing at a significantly higher speed than ever before. Further pressures include a series of problems around environmental pollution and the fact that welfare of people in major areas are facing with a large quantity of respiratory diseases.
However, there are several actions that governments could take to tackle these problems. Firstly, national budget can be invested in building social houses which costs much more cheaply than private houses to facilitate immigrants’ needs. Secondly, authorities should concern themselves more with security networks such as installing more cameras or introduce new laws about robbery punishment. A third option would be to promote more about public transport and environment-friendly vehicles in order to curb pollution problem.
In conclusion, governments could certainly implement a range of measures to enhance the quality of life for all city residents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'metropolises'' or 'metropolis's'?
Suggestion: metropolises'; metropolis's
...ners of the world are flocking to large metropolises day by day, searching for a more conten...
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Line 2, column 504, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...ficantly higher speed than ever before. Further pressures include a series of problems ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49411764706 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0520941563 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662745098039 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2367298706 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.769230769 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268750903393 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741244432119 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516896449149 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15512890103 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036411519385 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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