Online shopping has increased manifold in last decade owing to drastic improvement in internet & people nowadays use various shopping and services websites that follows review and opinion system. In my opinion, despite some minor issues this feedback system has become a backbone of online shopping and has many advantages.
Review helps both customers and sellers. On one hand it allows customers more information about a product from user's perspective, at the same it creates a competition amongst seller which results in better products and services. For instance, recently I purchased a power bank of MI. I was not aware about this company and would have preferred some branded tag such as Samsung or Apple, but reviews given by other users motivated me towards this purchase and thus I ended up saving money and got better product with the help of user reviews. Clearly, review system has made online services more trustworthy, understandable and better.
On the other hand, too much reliance on review system can be misused by sellers to fulfill their agenda.. Recently a study has reported that online shopping has given a rise to monopoly of single brands as people rely too much on high rated products. Many sellers make an agenda to get good ratings initially, some are even using unethical means such as buying product and giving reviews themselves, once these products are established sellers modify the information according to their benefits. People cannot differentiate and thus end up buying this product due to good rating, even though quality is degraded and cost is increased. This results in monopoly and is a loss for both customers & other sellers.
To conclude, rise in internet usage has shifted people's choices towards online shopping. Online shoppers provide an option to write reviews and opine about a product. This review feature is widely used by all platforms and is considered very helpful for customer. Although there are some instances where feedback system has resulted in a bad name for online shopping, but overall review system is very helpful for the end user.
- It is not wise for an industry to replace its experienced but old workers with new and young yet inexperienced individuals. 84
- Write a letter to your local council that the street you are living has become dirty lately.why it is happening ?what problem will it cause ?what would you suggest ? 90
- Some people think that there should be strict laws to control the amount of noise a person makes because of the disturbance it causes to peopleDiscuss both advantages and disadvantages 73
- More and more people are working at home rather than in the workplaces. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others think it will bring stress to the home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
- Nowadays, many people have to work longer time and they feel more stressful than before. What are the reasons? What can employers do to make their life easier? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 104, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17251461988 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57324918031 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584795321637 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6333265423 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5625 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120032675218 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413339074313 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318160795008 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733857198891 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027860919679 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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