Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
While in the past people used to live simply, nowadays people's lifestyle is becoming more sophisticated and multi-task. Personally, I believe that in this circumstances it is necessary for youth to earn the skill of planning their life. I feel this way for two reasons, which will be explored in the following essay.
First of all, people have to move on schedule in order to achieve their aims, and it should be started from lower ages. Today, Individuals set some goals in the very young ages and they feel satisfied only when they reach those. In fact, that is what success means to modern human beings. Planning at the first step, and then staying on that plan is the key to this definition of success, and being organized would help people triumph over obstacles in that difficult path.
Secondly, living without plans and schedule would result in chaos in life, and consequently, results in minds' anarchy. Individuals, especially young boys and girls, if do not program for they life, including studying, work, marriage and so on, might get into trouble in thinking process as well. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. About two years ago, when I graduated from college, I decided to take a rest and be unemployed for a while. In that period, I remember that after a while I became depressed and could not think appropriately and make right and wise decisions. But after deciding to have a written program and stick to that, situations got better rapidly and my mind worked more efficiently.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that adolescents need to learn and improve the vital skill of planning their own life and organizing their daily and annual activities and purposes. This is because it helps them to move toward their objects, and also, keeps their mind working in a proper way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...lti-task. Personally, I believe that in this circumstances it is necessary for youth...
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Line 7, column 280, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...cts, and also, keeps their mind working in a proper way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84615384615 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6229152518 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8703049895 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.8 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180862594306 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522273948727 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307346577341 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101748957267 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314647373446 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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