You are relocating to a new city. Write a letter to an agent to arrange a house for you and your family.
In your letter, you should tell:
– when you will relocate
– why you are relocating
– what kind of house you want.
Dear Sir,
My name is Valli, and I am writing regarding the rental services you are providing in Bangalore. I came across your site 'Rentals.com' online, and with the high reviews and ratings, hope you could serve me better. Owing to my father's promotion, we have been moving to Bangalore within a fortnight.
Since my father got promoted as a senior manager, he needs to report at Srinagar branch by September 15. Moreover, due to formalities and office procedures he might be busy around there once we reached there. Consequently, it might not be possible for us to rely on him in search of houses despite his emergencies.
So, I prefer your website with regards to our relocating process. I am a keen person who prefers to live in a place surrounded by ample greenery. Additionally, it should be a two-bedroom individual villa, with spacious living room and parking facilities. In case of other amenities, it is more preferable to be nearer
to the supermarket and bus stop.
I look forward to hearing from one of your realtor and thanks for being considerate.
Regards,
Valli
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, My name is Valli, and I am writing regar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, look, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91351351351 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88911713307 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.735135135135 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2752524039 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.6363636364 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145033162655 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423669634214 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533198525385 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0598643432506 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557801930832 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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