You are working for a Company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
explain why you want to take time off work
give details of the amount of time you need
suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Jyoti Singh, working in it department of our company Infosys.I am writing this letter to request you regarding the office leave.
I would like to ask permission for four days leave. I need this leaves because on next weekend my sisters wedding. So all wedding arrangements is under my observation. it is the happiest time for me and my family. Therefore I would like to stay in home to do all necessary work for wedding to make her marriage ceremony special.
I would like to tell you that all my work on project will be finish till this weekend. When I came back to office after this function then, I will start working out new project. Now my running project is near the completion.Before going to leave, I would complete all the remaining work and complete the project. I have no other urgent work comment at that time. I would be grateful if you allowed me at this time.
Hoping for a favourable response from you about this matter.
Yours faithfully,
jyoti Singh.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...in it department of our company Infosys.I am writing this letter to request you r...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...uest you regarding the office leave. I would like to ask permission for four d...
^
Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... to ask permission for four days leave. I need this leaves because on next weeken...
^
Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...g arrangements is under my observation. it is the happiest time for me and my fami...
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Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...the happiest time for me and my family. Therefore I would like to stay in home to do all...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y family. Therefore I would like to stay in home to do all necessary work for wed...
^^
Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...this weekend. When I came back to office after this function then, I will start w...
^^
Line 7, column 226, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Before
... running project is near the completion.Before going to leave, I would complete all th...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... about this matter. Yours faithfully, jyoti Singh.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67231638418 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6546699409 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61581920904 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7846947549 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.6153846154 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6153846154 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240191364204 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887523733835 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552198380442 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135567361115 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322038705791 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.