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Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer
We cannot live alone without other people’s help because we are social humans. For instance, life in neighborhood, we reside with the other citizens who have house in front, left, right or back side of our house. It is a fortune if we have a good circumstance and make a good relation with them. However not all neighbor is easy to talk with.
Firstly, the quality of a good neighbor is a friendliness, because it is impossible if we live with people who ignore our being. Saying hello, smile or sharing many stories are impressive gathering activities to do with them. However, in the big cities...
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we reside with the other citizens who
we reside with other citizens who
However not all neighbor is easy to talk with.
However not all neighbor are easy to talk with.
a culture which bring really positive impacts to many people.
a culture which brings really positive impacts to many people.
Sentence: In my village, people fund money and visit the sick person in hospital or house while bring fruit or bread.
Description: A conjunction, subordinating is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to while and bring
Sentence: Secondly, good neighbors are accupants who have good respect with others.
Error: accupants Suggestion: No alternate word
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Avg. Sentence Length: 15.824 21.0
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Score: 6.5 out of 9
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 269 350
No. of Characters: 1225 1500
No. of Different Words: 160 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.05 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.554 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.32 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 77 100
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 36 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.824 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.345 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.706 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.305 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.495 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.115 0.07
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