imagine you are going to an English speaking country to live. write a letter yo a rental agency. in your letter say.
what type os a house you need.
what the house size should be.
in what area should be located.
Dear sir/madam,
I would like to say that I am coming to Canada and wants to settle there. In this concern, I need perfect accommodation there for my family.
I am coming on the 20th of the next month so, I need a house that I would prefer nearby a market for household needs, a job sector, and a local community to help me to adjust and tackle daily tasks.
I would like to rent a two-bedroom small but furnished home, as I am having my family with me. The kitchen should be in decent condition as my family prefers homemade food rather than street treats. Adding to it, I love to join a job, so the accommodation nearby a bur or train route would be better for my daily journey. Moreover, a nicely decorated home can be suitable for our family as we would rent that for about one and half year.
I shall be thankful to you to find out an outstanding location that would match my requirements.
Yours sincerely.
Ramneek
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48554913295 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57597315123 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630057803468 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.4853116978 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101360751818 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463006274731 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032116107663 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0640575578202 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290704624868 0.0580467560999 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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