The information about the global sales of diverse category of digital games from 2000 to 2006. The data is calebrated in billions of dollars.
Overall, sales of all type of games was increased except console games in the time period of 6 years.
In details, in 2000 the sales of console games were of 6 billions, while two fold of console games were of handheld games. Moreover, in 2002 the sales of mobile games and online games were stared and the profit from its sales were negligible.Furthermore, sales of online and mobile games were beginning to surged and in 2004 sales reached over 3 billions dollars. After 2 years the sales of mobile games went up the figure of 6 billions of dollars and the sales of online games were touched to 9 billions dollars.
Besides this, console games sales were dropped continuously and sales of handheld games were escalated over the given tenure and the sales of console games were become half of beginning , whilst the sales of handheld games were of 18 billions dollars which was maximum.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81111111111 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37494403476 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433333333333 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2100489952 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.25 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319297985197 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182644859711 0.103423049105 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704837042495 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218805670291 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567794174147 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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