you rented a car from a company and had an accident. write a report to the companywhen and where did it happendescribe how the accident happenedwhat kind of action did you take after the accident

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you about the mishap with the car, I hired from your company. The car is a 1998 Ford model and the registration number is
AF01B3456.

Last week, I hired a car from your organization due to my official visit to Miami. On Tuesday morning, when I was travelling back to New York from Miami, I met with an accident on National Highway.

After finishing my business meeting, I started my journey for my hometown. While driving, I noticed that a truck driver was driving the vehicle above the permissible speed limits despite the heavy traffic on the highway. He lost the control over the wheel, when he was trying to overtake my car and trashed it from behind.

After the accident, I called the Miami Police Department on their helpline number and reported the whole incident. They have registered a case against the truck driver for negligence driving. I also called your customer care and informed them about the situation.

If you need any assistance on the claim settlement, I would be glad to help you.

Yours faithfully,
Deepak

Votes
Average: 8.1 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ord model and the registration number is AF01B3456. Last week, I hired a car f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82105263158 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58311156824 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652631578947 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7246624128 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3333333333 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.58333333333 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159312094831 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495781377541 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458729236948 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901891878576 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387797615349 0.0580467560999 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.