It is an undeniable fact that life is a mixture of happiness and sorrow. In the course of life, people have to face a lot of challenges. A section of society considers that an ideal way to move on is to accept the unpleasant occasions in life such as job dissatisfaction or poor income source. Whereas, few others opine that working hard and tackling such problems help to lead a successful life.
To begin with, acceptance of reality aid people to be satisfied with the life they are leading. In other words, such people may have the fear to take risks and face challenges. The causative factor of fear can be anything such as dept, financial insecurity and so on. Because of the financial burden on their shoulders, certain people fear to move forward. Yet another reason behind the acceptance of unpleasant situations is less interest towards materialistic pleasures. Even though they lead a tough life, due to lack of interest in pursuing a luxurious life, they tend to continue the job. To exemplify, Dravya, a 24 year old young millionaire in the United States is working in the Indian streets and shops for the last 3 years to earn daily living. He on an interview claimed that to be familiar with the sufferings of povertystricken, it is better to lead an ordinary life.
On the other hand, recognising an annoying situation alone would not make life easier. Rather than that one should work hard to curb that problem. Moreover, people with a strong desire realise their negatives and potentials and that determination paves the way to success. Nevertheless, optimistic people resolve their problems by analysing them efficiently and by adapting certain measures to overcome those problems. For instance, an individual dissatisfied in his own position in the company make attempts to secure higher positions and wages, sometimes even by quitting the job.
Finally, In my opinion, those people who take the initiative to take risks can lead a better life. But, would that really help them to accomplish their goals? One should not only be adventurous to face challenges, but also make necessary changes in their behaviour, actions, and performance.
In conclusion, I would like to reiterate my view that even though acceptance is a positive way of approaching a problem, people should not squander their quality time by accepting and maintaining a strenuous work-life balance.
- Some people prefer to live in small family units, while others think it is better to live in large family groups. Discuss both of views and give your opinion. 73
- Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge.To what extent is this a positive or a negative development? 73
- Economic progress is often used to measure a country's success. However, some people believe that other factors are more important. What other factors should also be considered when measuring a country's success? Do you think one factor is more important 67
- Eventhough globalization affects the world's economic in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. 56
- Many parents choose to teach their children at home rather than sending their children to school do you think the benefits of homeschooling outweigh its drawbacks 92
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01511335013 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88660151796 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549118387909 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7028945357 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8095238095 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9047619048 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157575861841 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476231671351 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367857225653 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907153461419 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318143290747 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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