last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter
1) thank them for the photos and for the holiday.
2) explain why you didn't write earlier.
3) invite them to come and stay with you.
Hello! How are you? I hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I'm writing this letter to tell you that the holidays we had spent together in France will remain a memorable time forever. I just received the package from the postman which has photographs of us. I'm really very thankful to you for the pictures you have sent to me and for the time which you have given me when I was at your home.
I'm really very sorry that I'm writing to you so late. The reason is that when I arrived home, on that night my mother getting severe pain in the heart and we immediately rush to the hospital. However, with the god blessing, there is no major cause found. It's only the gastric problems as you know my mother is very fond of eating spicy food. But now there is no need to worry everything is fine here.
I think it's my turn now to invite you to my home. Make a plan and tell me when you are coming. I've a surprise for you and I'm sure you'll definitely like it. One thing I want to tell you that my mother's birthday is near if possible try to come between 1st August- 8th August.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Truly,
Harsimran Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...he postman which has photographs of us. Im really very thankful to you for the pic...
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...given me when I was at your home. Im really very sorry that Im writing to yo...
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...r home. Im really very sorry that Im writing to you so late. The reason is t...
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... need to worry everything is fine here. I think its my turn now to invite you to...
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...a plan and tell me when you are coming. Ive a surprise for you and Im sure youll de...
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...oking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Truly, Harsimran Singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, really, so, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27433628319 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08980759748 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601769911504 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5210654929 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.375 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.125 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316429131148 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102569967965 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799029958809 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177764618171 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117678084987 0.0580467560999 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.89 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.01 7.59969072165 79% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.