Some people are fond of buying new gadgets, phones, or laptops.
Is this a good or bad thing? Discuss your opinion.
some individuals are eager to purchase new tools such as cell-phones and computers.l personally, agree with being updated and keeping up with the technology. it can't be denied technology plays the key role in contemporary life I mean the more you immerse yourself in it the more you are aware of the global issues. The flow of the information is transferring fast among people therefore who is not knowledgable about this matter can be considered as an illiterate person.alot of opportunities will be opened up by using the new technology. I mean not only you can gain the information through it but also u can exhibit your abilities which can provide you with a lot of job opportunities. A lot of companies enjoy these gadgets to advertise their productions so it's the cornerstone of their corporation for earning money and promoting the level of their job. Although we are provided by a lot of proses which were mentioned, there are some cons that should be considered for instance, sometimes buying these facilities can charge you and you will lavish your money instead of buying basic materials for your life. Furthermore, it's possible that your privacy be invaded.children are being mandated with perilous information and solitude, sedentary lifestyle, obesity, having irregular sleeping pattern and a lot of personality disorders will be increased among people through using them. Ultimately it should be reiterated people should have been educated before using these gadgets and if people were informed this issue would be solved easily. To conclude in my opinion the merits overweight the demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for instance, i mean, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16858237548 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00354795754 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593869731801 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3344587577 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.888888889 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119036474977 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509200412592 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356125323364 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119036474977 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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