A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor.
Crimes takes place around the world, being small or large , we are required to be take necessiarly steps to impede or eradicate them. Inspite of number of the crimes ,only few of them are realy worse .Even the most heinous crime doesn't require the abduction of civil rights, but given high punishment.
Lets take a example , suppose a person commited a murder , it is possible to punish him severly. But case of removing the civil rights , which include the right to treated equally is not apt even though may sound emotionaly appelling.Every person in the earth irrespective of the gender , race and what-not, will posses thier civil rights and could claim it.Appropriation of civil rights may lead to many problems , exploits of the accused individual , physical and mental distress.
On the other hand there are individuals , who take advantage of this position and exploit it to the maximum. Though it would not be a take away the civil rights , they are required a hefty punishment.
Niram modi , the person who took advanatage of the position caused a loss of many thousand pounds to the government and being a affluent person he could stay away form police and thus must be punished to a maximum extent.
In the above case rescinding the benefit from his own labour is a good idea , will have a impact on him to an extent.Though it may be emotionally appelling to remove the civil rights from the person such as equality in treatment , it would be a against the intrinsic moto of human rights .But there are few rights that could be canceled, causing the impact on the people .It all boils down to the level of crime commmited , petty crimes don't require those.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, so, thus, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 288.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80902777778 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61794863145 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576388888889 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.81069337 60.3974514979 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.125 118.986275619 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 23.4991977007 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 7.80617977528 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257465026105 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999473262555 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701338442018 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133219674427 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726061967231 0.0667264976115 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 14.1392134831 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 48.8420337079 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.