Prevention is better than cure. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures.
To what extent do you agree?
In this current day and age, cause of greatly polluted not only air and water but also food sources, there are having some appearance of many hazardous diseases which may kill humans in the tick of time. However, the thinking of waiting to cure and preventions are inavailable, is also existing in a lot of people. In my perspective, I advocate that we should care about and promote the investment of anticipatory precautions.
At first, if we regard to a prevention, definitely that it will let you paying in an affordable price than treatment.The cancer patients, for
instance, if they prefer keep their bodies in a healthy and balance life, eat nutritional food such as: vegetable, fruits,.. and reduce some harmful meals, may be they will be avoided a cancer and more dangerous diseases. As we know, the cost of treating cancer is very expensive and moreover, the rate of successful is would be extremely low if he or she is in an end- stage.
In addition, the awareness of investing deterrent measures help people not only envolving their quality of life but also economizing and promoting our family and social economy. In one country community, if the number of patients improve in an unexpected and significant tendency, whether that will nation finance developed. Absolutely it will be greatly affected and lead the seriously stagnant budget of goverment. Furthermore, that country will deal with the economic crisis, and it vitally effective to the citizen life.
In conclusion, we regconize an vital importance of preventive investment and I supposed that the gorverment and everybody should concern and pay more attention with this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90730496256 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639705882353 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4877002514 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.727272727 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122146790455 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430376674021 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343847182068 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0620059804149 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224717899893 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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