Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is true that there are more and more global outstanding challenges which come from a number of fields such as environment, education and population. The following essay will take a look at several problems which caused from this tendency in Vietnam in decades and point out a number of effective solutions should be tacked to improve the situation as well.
To start with, there are some of most important issues facing Vietnamese in the near future. Firstly, over population will lead a series of negative impacts as raised costs of living, reduced life quality, unemployment, lack of food. Another point worths noting is environmental pollution. This can explained by the fact that human have been destroying their surroundings through various severe activities such as deforestation to construct landmarks, ecotourism destinations and industrial firms or emission of industrial gasses which lead greenhouse effects directly. Finally, education also is one of the crucial phenomenon that effected seriously by this trend. Particularly, highly educational costs may cause many children must dropout of school to work hard for a living. Consequently, quality of labor force will be degraded.
However, since such issues are serious, the Government and individuals should take steps to address these problems. On top of that, the Government needs to spread awareness and educate citizens in both rural as well as urban areas about family planning, encourages couples to not bear more than one child. Furthermore, people should use the alternative transportation like bicycles, scooters and electric vehicles instead of cars to help reduce emissions of polluting gases. Lastly, more public schools with modern facilities should be built by local authorities due to ensure every children have right to access educational system, both in rural and urban areas.
In conclusion, this essay have presented the fact that there are some significant issues occur in Vietnam and a number of appropriate measures need to be taken to address this trend.
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- Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.Write a letter to the 78
- Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?Give reasons for you 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, look, may, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, to start with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46394984326 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88572254062 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645768025078 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4493378705 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6428571429 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155107517815 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494442122519 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354769253484 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866725189884 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358157903337 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.