The pie charts show information concerning free time activities preferred by teenagers during 2013.

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The pie charts show information concerning free time activities preferred by teenagers during 2013.

The pie charts compared three different leisure activities favored by adolescents in Australia, the UK, and the US during 2013.

It is evident that watching TV made up the same and also the biggest proportion in Australia and the US, while it can be seen from the charts that the most common activity in the UK was reading.

By far the most significant percentage of free time activities in both Australia and the US was accounted for by watching television, at a hefty 45%. More than a third as much, namely 40%, was amounted to surfing the Internet, leaving reading at only 15% in the US. At the same time, the figures for both activities in Australia were almost similar (about 27% each).

Regarding the UK, reading occupied half of the total recorded figures, whereas 30% and 20% of the entire activities were represented by using the Internet and watching TV respectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, second, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 150.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66640832082 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 176.041082164 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 506.74238477 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6625490629 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.571428571 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418028864684 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20525142238 0.084324248473 243% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17170698992 0.0667982634062 257% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286772404628 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107924972371 0.056905535591 190% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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