Imagine that you are preparing for a trip. You plan to be away from your home for a year. In addition to clothing and personal care items, you can take one additional thing. What would you take and why? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice
Planning trip is very tedious and you have to make sure you plan it properly for it to be successful. If I am planning for a 1 year long trip then along with my clothing and personal care items, i would love to take my car along with me. Actually i can not imagine a trip without my car. There are several reasons for my attachment to my car and why my trip success depends on it.
To begin with, car makes my live convenient. In a year long trip, it is obvious that i am going to roam a lot and see new places. In order to roam around with my own rules and conditions , I need my car. With car I do not have worry about the mode of commute or about the timings that needs be matched with travel groups or train/ bus schedule. So i can explore at my convenience and I do not have be dependent on any thing or anybody.
Secondly, car can also be used in case of any unknown impediments of my trip. For example, when hotels are all booked up - in such scenarios i can spend the night in my car and next day i can search for new hotel. In addition to this, in case of bad weather I do not have to worry as my car will be very helpful. I can avoid getting drenched in rain or getting burnt by sun rays. Car will also help me in saving money, as I do not have to acquire a rented car which might cost me fortune.
Lastly, even there might be some issues like car break down , tyre puncture, etc. Since I am cable of handling car as i am using them since a very log time, so can handle tyre puncture by my self and by monthly service i can maintain my car and avoid getting into other car issue. Since every trip might have some uncertainties, I S the advantage i get from having a car with me is much more then getting to such troubles.
In conclusion, I love road trips, since its is going to be one year trip I would love to have a car by my side. Car will increase my exposure and my adventure to the next level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...th my clothing and personal care items, i would love to take my car along with me...
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... around with my own rules and conditions , I need my car. With car I do not have w...
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...ravel groups or train/ bus schedule. So i can explore at my convenience and I do ...
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...ore at my convenience and I do not have be dependent on any thing or anybody. ...
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...ience and I do not have be dependent on any thing or anybody. Secondly, car can a...
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... spend the night in my car and next day i can search for new hotel. In addition t...
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...might be some issues like car break down , tyre puncture, etc. Since I am cable of...
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...tc. Since I am cable of handling car as i am using them since a very log time, so...
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...cture by my self and by monthly service i can maintain my car and avoid getting i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.01813471503 4.8611393121 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23105443718 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497409326425 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7598329506 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6315789474 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3157894737 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160966752095 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061878151416 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708001552767 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102376806681 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909244167804 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 58.1214874552 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.04 10.9000537634 55% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.