The Growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in a effort to deal withthe health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
actually being over wegth is a bad issue in the recent years. people dont like to be a fat person becuase people dont concern about them and they should live alone. Hence they tried to solve this problem by doing excersise, eat healthy food, etc. but most of them believe that these solution should teach in the schools. In this manuscript, we want to talk about this topic.
As mentioned above, being over weigth is the big problem recent years. this problem has lot of reason like non healthy food, lazy person and method of our life, short time to do excersise and etc. all persons who are over wegth concern about this and try to lose their weigth and be a fitness person. so the first idea which are think about that, is changing the eating habits. but some of them reduce their food more than standard and this is the worst thing for them. they should do excersise to reduce their weigth and dont push themselve by fast.
I think the best time to inform people about being over weigth is when they are children. when you prevent something actually you dont need cure any more. so when children know about the problem and how to stop this problem, they allways has standard weight and they are fit. but we shouldnt stop this education until they are old.
In conclusion, I believe this is a good idea to teach student about the over weigth desiease and stop them eat more than normal and harmful food to have healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, hence, if, so, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52873563218 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.95821052313 2.80592935109 70% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513409961686 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.9 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8670849541 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.875 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118961315773 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450041933476 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287657927879 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790958336125 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028530018292 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 50.2224549098 161% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.49 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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