Essay topics:
Write a paragraph of 120-150 words about traffic in big cities in Viet Nam.
Nowadays, traffic is one of the most important problems in big cities in Viet Nam because it brings many harm. Firstly, too many vehicles cause traffic jams in cities during rush hour. Secondly, there are many young people riding their bikes dangerously with high speech. Finally, some people intentionally violate traffic laws such as passing a red light, carrying bulky, etc, which can lead to traffic accidents. Moreover drinking alcohol also leads to tragic deaths and don not wear helmet as well. In conclusion, in my opinion, traffic in big cities is dangerous. I hope the traffic in Viet Nam will be improved in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ys, traffic is one of the most important problems in big cities in Viet Nam becau...
^^
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun harm seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much harm', 'a good deal of harm'.
Suggestion: much harm; a good deal of harm
...ig cities in Viet Nam because it brings many harm. Firstly, too many vehicles cause traff...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 417, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...c, which can lead to traffic accidents. Moreover drinking alcohol also leads to tragic d...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 525.0 965.302439024 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 106.0 196.424390244 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95283018868 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2086804361 3.73543355544 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47394755772 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.764150943396 0.547539520022 140% => OK
syllable_count: 156.6 283.868780488 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3802647323 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.1428571429 5.23603664747 289% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253892052359 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118612111261 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949299379937 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253892052359 0.15604864568 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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