task 1: the number of marriages and divorces
The first bar graph illustrate the number of marriages and divorce in USA residents from 1970 to 2000. Units were measured in millions.the following chart provide compassion of adults marital status in 2 different years in USA.marital status were count in parentage.
overall,there was a decrees in the marriage of USA over the 30 years,while the divorce rate witness a fluctuation given era.however,the adults willingness to have and keeping the marriage life became decline in 2000.
at the beginning 1970,graph showed 2.5 millions people in USA had a legal relationship and remain stable in next decade.then gradually dropped to a 2 million in 2000.while,people who divorced fluctuated over the period ,with just over 1 million in 1970,peaking at approximately 1.4 million in 1990 and then steadily decreasing to just over 1 million same as the 1970.
turning to the other graph, percentage of adult Americans,married was highest in 1970 and in 2000 it hit fall to 60%,and it witnessed a 10% decreased. similarly,widowed digressed to an insignificant amount,roughly 5%,while adults who never married and divorced were rose respectively 10% and nearly 10%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... in millions.the following chart provide compassion of adults marital status in 2...
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Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...ults marital status in 2 different years in USA.marital status were count in pare...
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Suggestion: Overall
...al status were count in parentage. overall,there was a decrees in the marriage of ...
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Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , there
...us were count in parentage. overall,there was a decrees in the marriage of USA ov...
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Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a decree' or simply 'decrees'?
Suggestion: a decree; decrees
...nt in parentage. overall,there was a decrees in the marriage of USA over the 30 year...
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Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , while
...in the marriage of USA over the 30 years,while the divorce rate witness a fluctuation ...
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Suggestion: , the
... witness a fluctuation given era.however,the adults willingness to have and keeping ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
...ess a fluctuation given era.however,the adults willingness to have and keeping the mar...
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...riage life became decline in 2000. at the beginning 1970,graph showed 2.5 mil...
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Suggestion: , people
...lly dropped to a 2 million in 2000.while,people who divorced fluctuated over the period...
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Suggestion: ,
... who divorced fluctuated over the period ,with just over 1 million in 1970,peaking...
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Suggestion: Turning
...t over 1 million same as the 1970. turning to the other graph, percentage of adult...
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Line 13, column 58, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , married
...her graph, percentage of adult Americans,married was highest in 1970 and in 2000 it hit ...
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Line 13, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...2000 it hit fall to 60%,and it witnessed a 10% decreased. similarly,widowed digre...
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Suggestion: Similarly
... 60%,and it witnessed a 10% decreased. similarly,widowed digressed to an insignificant a...
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Suggestion: , widowed
...it witnessed a 10% decreased. similarly,widowed digressed to an insignificant amount,ro...
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Suggestion: , roughly
...wed digressed to an insignificant amount,roughly 5%,while adults who never married and ...
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Suggestion:
...ly 5%,while adults who never married and divorced were rose respectively 10% and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, similarly, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45054945055 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49213756251 2.65546596893 132% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631868131868 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.8835804041 43.030603864 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.333333333 112.824112599 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3333333333 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15300643983 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923417799545 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107382419322 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982807022853 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640965566497 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 61.2550243902 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.