Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, with the growth in customers’ demand, a lot of companies allocate their products all around the world, which are now available for purchasing almost anywhere. I strongly believe that this modern development is positive for culture and traditions worldwide.
Firstly, when people want to buy another international commodities, they can purchase it easily because they don’t need to order from the website and wait for shipping. Most of products that attract people from all over the word, such as food, clothes, are manufactured by big companies in the development countries,which might help people can choose products quickly. In Vietnam, for example, many people want to ear Danisa, which is the famous cookie brand in the world, don’t need to go to Danmark to take it. Vietnamese people can go to the Co-op or the Big C to get that cookie. It may help their life more convenient.
Secondly, it enhance tourism industries. In Malaysia, for example, not any tourist come to Malaysia can eat traditional food. Only by selling products such as food, drink that they can eating easily and to become more comfortable during their journey. Many tourist when they travel in other country see their brand companies product in their hometown, they will probably feel secure because they don’t worry if they can’t eat anything in other countries.
In conclusion, some people believe that this modern development is largely detrimental to culture and traditions worldwide, but I say that the same products from everywhere is the positive way, which increase the growth in customers’ demand.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the products') or simply say ''Most products''.
Suggestion: Most of the products; Most products
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Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: ALL_OVER_THE_WORD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'all over the world' (=globally)?
Suggestion: all over the world
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that cookie. It may help their life more convenient. Secondly, it enhance t...
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Message: Did you mean 'enhances'?
Suggestion: enhances
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'eat'
Suggestion: eat
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35271317829 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89547076941 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565891472868 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7069990353 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.083333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181560795802 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068442750072 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503976118548 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114264989676 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316746943323 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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