Respond to the instructions below and support your position with
relevant reasoning drawn from your academic studies, reading,
observation, and/or experience.
The online 'blogosphere' emerged at a high rate in the United States.
Due to this many political reviews and opinions are published on the
internet in order to support or criticize any political group or person.
After the increase in this online medium, the standards of the new
media coverage declined at a sharp rate. Now normal public would get
the detailed ground level information from this source.
Initially , many people was unawared of the actual truth and depth of
any political matters as the lack of platform for common people to
share their experience. But now due to the online source an individual
can share their personal opinions and reviews. Not everyone nowadays
is dependent for the news coverage for the political topics . infact they
can provide much more information than any news channel and that
too faster . We can consider this as a big advantage of emergence of
'blogosphere' online.
Secondly , we may not be completely dependent on this source as there
are chances that many people might leak and spread the fake or
improper news . Many groups can get benifited due to it by showing
their group as better than other on the basis of false news . The genuine
political groups who lack of such source of people who cannot deliver
their ideology to the public gets affected and becomes sided , so
sometimes news coverage is also important in such situations which
can make people aware about such matter . Example if in any of the
evil group there are more people who can spread their group's image as
fake and on the other side if any genuine people organization who dt
have such source to spread their genuinity to the people then this group
would be sided .
Thus we can conclude that the emergence of online 'blogosphere' is
much helpful to the nation and its residents untill it is used with a good
moral or at certain limit . And standards of news coverage though
declined as compared to the old time but it is much important in the
present too . So we say that like most of the things , it also has
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 355.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95774647887 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42248584311 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487323943662 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6269329589 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1875 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 29.0 4.97078651685 583% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 7.80617977528 372% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0140681986163 0.243740707755 6% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00576059182069 0.0831039109588 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0120990008855 0.0758088955206 16% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00458905450106 0.150359130593 3% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135324546436 0.0667264976115 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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