People sleep less than they used to in the past What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on them?

Essay topics:

People sleep less than they used to in the past

What do you think is the reason behind this?

What are the effects on them?

The number of hours people sleep in the present time has been reduced when compared with previous days. There are many important reasons such as the introduction of digital devices, modern work environment and also food habits affect sleep. Consequently, reduced sleep affect health and leads to diseases.

The most important reason in my view is, the introduction and usage of digital devices like mobile phones, laptops, TV screens which keep us awakes thorough-out the night and also by emitting blue light they alter our brains normal function. Secondly, many of the job’s today require people to do night work and also long day time working hours make people to wake early and sleep at late timings. Finally, the beverages like coffee and having dinner at late hours in the night, affect our normal programmed sleep cycle.

The worst consequence will be health getting affected first when the sleep is altered. Recently, many studies shows decreased sleep is one of the causes for chronic diseases like Diabetes, Hypertension, heart diseases. Once the brain gets affected people become more irritable, moody and develop more stress which again leads to decreased sleep. The long terms effect in brain includes memory disturbances, since memory consolidation takes place during deep sleep and thinking also gets affected leading to decreased in overall performance.

In conclusion, because of the surrounding environment and modern lifestyle our sleep is affected and it is having huge implications on our health. Maintaining a good sleep hygiene like turning of electronic devices, regular sleep timings, changing our working hours will help us to have good sleep and make our days more enjoyable.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36900369004 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6127493823 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590405904059 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.718720968 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.25 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131070401746 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531155530202 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0202152355047 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836979698901 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136100698095 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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