To prepare for the future of stepping into the job industry, the university seems to be the path for everyone towards future success. From math, language, history and athletic, all the subjects you would be taught in the school. However, some people have opinions that not all university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. From my perspective, all universities students must be required to take history courses from all fields of studies. I will give my point of view in the next part.
First of all, the reasons why history class is necessary is because it gives an insight into what happened in the past and how a country has been formed through wars and colonised. we wouldn't have known who discovered the new continent and who initiated the opium war. The history of the country gives us understandings of the relations among many countries. For example, England had colonised Australia, thus, you could find some historical heritages which are connected to England in Australia.
Second, it is a global trend that enterprises tend to expand their corporations worldwide. In other words, that would benefit graduate students if they get prepared for the culture and history of other countries when they got the chance to work overseas. Not only the job market has been shifted from local to global, but university students also get more opportunities for being able to exchange school overseas since lots of local universities have signed up the contract with universities from other countries. By saying that, students who have better understandings of the background of the country they are going to as exchange students would have more topics to talk about when they were studying in the local universities aboard.
In conclusion, my perspectives on the subject as to all university students should be constrained to study history despite it's not necessarily in their field of study based on these two main reasons.
- Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect. In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do? 1. Interrupt and correct the mistake right away; 2. Wait until the class or meet 71
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06402439024 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74125719377 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2602811373 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.642857143 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316764855136 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11031335568 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126789558825 0.0737576698707 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195667506537 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112232665029 0.0645574589148 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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