You want a book that you cannot find. Later you found it and it is avilable in a bookstore in another city. Write a letter to the manager of the bookstore.
In your letter
- Give details of the book
- Say why you need this book
- Tell how you will pay for it.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to purchase the motivational book, The Art of War, written by Sheen Jib which is available at your store.
I am staying at Vapi, a small town situated near Surat. I have inquired about the book "Art of War" in my town from several storekeepers, but it is not available. While going through your website, I got to know that this book is available at your store. It has a white cover page with the title of the book written in red. Moreover, the book is published in the year 2001.
I am a college student at SPB where it is a culture for every student to speak about one motivational book every semester. Since the book Art of War explains deeply on how to overcome fears and defeat, I am interested to give a presentation on it.
As I am a student at university and have limited access to banks, I can deposit the cash in your account. You can mail me the details of your bank account on my email id abc@gmail.com or on 9876543218.
I solicit your co-operation.
Yours faithfully
John Patel.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...Vapi, a small town situated near Surat. I have inquired about the book 'Art ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e book is published in the year 2001. I am a college student at SPB where it i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.625 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76163495129 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7443888398 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213970902894 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707171179538 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434249439317 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103719354573 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375527104412 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.