Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that one should be older to be eligible to be a traffic participant. My own view is that, age is not a relevant and decisive factor to enhance road safety. I would like to state my opinions in the paragraphs below.
Not age, but the education system, does define how well one is equipped with the driving skills. Currently, the minimum requirement for the adult is to be over eighteen to drive. We assume that they are responsible and reliable enough. However, one’s ability can not be enhanced if he does not receive proper training and frequent practice, as they age. For example, according to an annual report from the Vietnam National Transportation Department, middle-aged and elder citizens have been responsible for the multitude of death caused by accidents while travelling or commuting by bikes and cars.
Having a good command of driving by itself can not prevent unexpected accidents without help from the government. Support systems in some countries, especially the developing ones, are not well-structured which have been the main causes of a significant number of accidents on the roads, for instance, lack of policy to improve infrastructure and poor skills training centers. Raising the legal age to drive will not alleviate the problems as someone expect because it is not a determining element contributing to the issues.
To conclude, in my opinion, it is not age that makes one being more skillful at driving but other factors from the training system and policy provided. Therefore, age restriction should not be a main concern in building a safer transport system.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 452, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'expects'.
Suggestion: expects
...l not alleviate the problems as someone expect because it is not a determining element...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15094339623 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90714003002 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630188679245 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2132237318 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151125673146 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523860758756 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332522883452 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882015501189 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223466411762 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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