Completing a university education is thought by some to be the best way. To get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is considered by some that the key to having a better job is to finish a university education, while there are others who think it is better to have experience and soft skills. In my opinion, I believe that having a university education is essential for academic jobs while soft skills and experience are more useful in business.
On the one hand, having work experience and soft skills, such as leadership skill and other interpersonal skills, can get a favor to the employer according to some. For many positions there are an overwhelming number of applicants and, therefore, it is often thought that having relevant experience in that line of work or having required useful soft skills that can be valuable to a company, can put ahead of the game when applying for a position.
On the other hand, many think it is easier for most people to find a good job if they are a university graduates with a good degree. In other words, having tertiary education put people one step ahead of others who do not and this can be the deciding factor in getting a good job. The competition to get into universities and the increasing number of graduates show how significant this level of education is for people's future work opportunities.
In conclusion, getting a good job requires a relevant background and experience depending on the type of work and field. people should make sure they attain the necessary skills or degrees before applying for a job in order to be sure of success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...epending on the type of work and field. people should make sure they attain the necess...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80694980695 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76918238362 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494208494208 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.3044141031 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.333333333 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7777777778 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8888888889 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367129070409 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167482235544 0.084324248473 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602898369786 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222940146033 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611019116214 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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