SuperCorp recently moved its headquarters to Corporateville. The recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville proves that Corporateville is a superior place to live than Middlesburg, the home of SuperCorp's original headquarters. Moreover, Middlesburg is a predominately urban area and according to an employee survey, SuperCorp has determined that its workers prefer to live in an area that is not urban. Finally, Corporateville has lower taxes than Middlesburg, making it not only a safer place to work but also a cheaper one. Therefore, Supercorp clearly made the best decision.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on the assumptions and what the implications are if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
Whenever a Company/firm decides to move its headquarters it should conduct some extensive reasearch and base its assumptions and decisions on some hard facts. No two cities are similar, they always differ in terms of demographics, resources available or environmental conditions. Therefore a company should perform a thourough analysis of both the places before actually making a big move.
Going with the argument that Supercorp made the best decision from moving to Corporateville from Middlesburg would not be correct thing to do.
Firstly looking at the reasoning where the paragraph says there has been a surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville making it a superior place to live looks somewhat unconvincing. The surge in the number of homeowners doesnt imply people prefer living in Corporateville. There maybe an increase in property prices due to which the people are seeing this as an investment oppurtunity and hence are considering buying houses for investment purpose. They maybe buying the house and then renting them. Then again theremay be a surge in number of people renting because a specific industry is doing better than other industries and people of that industry prefer shifitng in this place for better jobs.
Secondly looking at the argument which talks of employee survey, we would not know the sample considered for this survey. Were the employees who were a part of the survey from upper class, middle class or the lower class and if SuperCorp caters to all the segments of society. Also when we talk of Urban, does Corporateville come under the definition of an Urban place, what exactly is an urban place is a question of importance here.
Finally Lower taxes may mean a several other things. Lowere taxes mean a cheaper and less depeloved place along with not great facilities. Also the target group of SuperCorp is a group which prefers a cheaper place to work or does it belong to that strata of society which doenst like to buy cheaper goods. Simply saying that Corporateville is cheaper because of lower taxes would not be right.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Suggestion: doesn't
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Suggestion: Also,
... caters to all the segments of society. Also when we talk of Urban, does Corporatevi...
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Suggestion: Finally,
...ace is a question of importance here. Finally Lower taxes may mean a several other th...
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Suggestion: thing
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Suggestion: Also,
... place along with not great facilities. Also the target group of SuperCorp is a grou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 344.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08430232558 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78482910079 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566860465116 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0915734922 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.3125 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214391125741 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620775688923 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623132223399 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104101681232 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400218001552 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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