You work for an international company and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
say how your work could be done while you are away
ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Mr. Smith,
Greetings for the day!
I am writing this letter, to get your permission to work in our company's head office in London.
I am keenly interested to work in our head office for six months since I heard about the training provided by our board of directors regarding new marketing strategies. Owing to this I applied for the training about this session last month, and now I got an offer letter from our board of directors to join this training work for six months.
I am well aware of the situation when I was not here at our local branch. My temporary absence not only may affect our daily routine work but also to my client. However, I assure you that in my absence my assistance Rahul handle all my work. Further, I assure you that I check I may email on daily basis and reply to all my clients as soon as possible.
If you allow me to leave, then I really come back with new strategies, which will help us to promote our products. Besides this, I need your assistance to arrange my flight ticket on 13th September by airlines, and also transportation to reach International airport Delhi. Could you help me all this as soon possible?
Yours Sincerely,
Amanpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 29, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours Sincerely, Amanpreet Kaur
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, really, regarding, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72946859903 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56668626122 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618357487923 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.8475769 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274833809273 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100182736741 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888983693237 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151613377093 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101666034058 0.0580467560999 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.