Nowadays cities have become overcrowded. Given reason and its solutions.
Today majority of people migrating in urban areas have become escalating day by day due to these citified sectors have become overpopulated. There are uncountable complications like job opportunities and the best facilities provided by metropolitan areas are main along with measures to tackle these obstacles.
The major factors for over flow of people going in cities is high chances of jobs, better health services and higher education provided by urban areas. Moreover, a vast amount of trades, industries, factories and other businesses sets up in metropolitan areas that is why there are more opportunities for jobless masses to get a handsome income provided job as compare to countryside that is why cities have become overcrowded. In addition to this, a better health treatments and higher education given by regime is another factors for rising population in urban areas because in cities have the best hospitals with advance technologies and big universities and colleges of different fields so that is the reason masses and students going in citified areas for take the best treatments and education. For example, a survey by local newspaper reported that government gives priority to cities as compare to villages because a vast amount of voters living in urban areas.
There are huge number of solutions to stop over flow of humans going in cities and first is that if authorities sets up factories and industries in villages than it is great chances for jobless to getting a better job and they neglect ideas to leave their place as well as going in cities in search of work. In other words, it is mandatory for regime to improve education standards and health services of countryside schools and hospitals. Apart from that, government should spend a some amount of money to give higher education in villages educational centre to students because students are the pillars of nation. Beside that, regime should hir good doctors and provided better treatments in countryside health centres to improve health conditions of patients. For example, USA have opened a high school, the best hospitals and sets up trades in their villages to give equal services to all citizens due to these people comfortable living in countryside and give their contribution to an increase of region is economy.
In conclusion, although, there are many factors to overcrowded cities but solutions are also present to solve this hurdles by government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 915, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al services to all citizens due to these people comfortable living in countryside...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, as for, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2053.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18434343434 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81664271357 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459595959596 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 661.5 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.4901500558 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.083333333 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 20.7667163134 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144625544156 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522140922211 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535653574867 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890322078529 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473864015932 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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