The diagram below show the development of the horse over a period of 40 million yearsWrite a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below

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The diagram below show the development of the horse over a period of 40 million years
Write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below

The diagram presents the evolution of the horse from Eohippus to modern kind, with particular significant changes in foot structure, in a 40-million-year period.

Initially, the first species of horse, which is called Eohippus, had a small body and a snout. It had tiny toes that were separate from each other. Eventually, about 10 million years after, ancestor of the modern horse evolved into Mesohippus, which body enlarged while the tail and snout became longer. At this point, the middle toe of its leg also enlarged.

Once the first two evolution stages finished, it can be seen that horse...

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Sentence: As a result, a horse went through different evolutional stages before transforming into modern type.
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