In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Speed is important and we should. But, we should follow the rules. it is an important queto that says, "do your job in speed it is never mind if you did mistake because without that you can not understand well." it means that if you have enough speed you can edit your job and redit and at the last you can understand them as well. However, i am agree with essay statement that says, Nowadays in world risk is parts of our jobs and mistake is never mind we people should finished their jobs faster rather than they work slowly and be sure that everything is correct. So, i have some reasons. For example, proposl writing, field jobs and studying. they are my personal reasons about essay topic.
First, our manager always mentioned that try to finish your job swiftly and do not do slowly try to risk and after that yo can find a new way to correct your mistake. In fact, you can recheck your duties. For example, we are working on a proposl about animale husbandary. However, we work quicky and two times check the proposal. At the first, we risk and have soem errors and after recheck we clear the problem. However,i believe it is importat to to accept the risk and do our duties faster rather than we do our duties slowly without any mistake. It is important to me to do quickly my duties or anything elss and i dont like to do anything slowly without mistake i like risk with mistake.
second, during the office jobs sometime we should travel to county (Village or rural out side the city). So, we must finish our duties for 8 hours and it is important to do quickly as soon as possible. However, i am support the essy statement that says, Nowadays in world, it is importatn to accept the risk and do faster thatn work slowly without any mistake. I like risk to end my duties with mistake because i am sure for recheck that i will correct that mistake. On the other hand, i do not like to finish my work slowly because i feel uncomfortable. Moreover, i prefer to do my duties faster with risk rather than slowly with out mistake.
Third, when i studying some books. I read them three times because i think if i did three times it is better, i can understand better. for first and second times i just take the main idea and try to understand the book. But, the last time i will understand the concept of the author. However, i am agree with essy statement that says, nowadays people do their works with risk and making mastakes. But, they finished quickly and i think it is bettter thaan work slowly withou any mistakes. Further, i like working quickly and risk making than to work slowly with out any mistakes.
To sum up, as i metioned in above lines i prefer to work swiftly and risk making mistakes in different places like, working on proposl, finish my duties in specified time in field and even in studying or reading books. However, i strongly support the essy statemtent that says, nowadays in world, it is important ot work swiftly and accept the riks and makeing some mistakes rather than work slowly with out any mistakes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, third, well, for example, i feel, i think, in fact, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 27.0 7.30242825607 370% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 87.0 22.412803532 388% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 30.3222958057 214% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2496.0 1373.03311258 182% => OK
No of words: 558.0 270.72406181 206% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47311827957 5.08290768461 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86024933743 4.04702891845 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28921170495 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 145.348785872 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.365591397849 0.540411800872 68% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 768.6 419.366225166 183% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 26.0 3.25607064018 799% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 13.0662251656 222% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.362667133 49.2860985944 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0689655172 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2413793103 21.698381199 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.37931034483 7.06452816374 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 4.19205298013 954% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.27373068433 257% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321143697721 0.272083759551 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886120984997 0.0996497079465 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987734093247 0.0662205650399 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213772165571 0.162205337803 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726249876734 0.0443174109184 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.3589403974 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 53.8541721854 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.0289183223 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.2367328918 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.53 8.42419426049 78% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.7273730684 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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