"Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with the station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, several local businesses that used to run advertisements during our late-night news program have just cancelled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs."
News is one of the most viewed program in the television where people get to know the information of their society, country, universe and many other things. News is important to every person.
Firstly the source of data is not mentioned in the passage and the number of complaints is also not mentioned in the passage so we are not sure that the information include all the viewers or not.
Secondly it is mentioned in the passage that local business that used to advertise during late night show has cancelled is due to the the increase time in national news and decrease in local news which is claimed in the passage without any proof and data it may be due to the other program which has recently started and has more viewers than the news and it has nothing to do with increase in national news.
Thirdly, there is no guarantee that after increasing the local news in the late night news program the revenue from the advertisement will rise up because it is not clear that the advertising company has cancelled due to increase in local news they may have cancelled because of the loss occurred in the business.
Therefore instead of restoring the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level news channel have to work in finding the root cause of the decline in advertising contracts and in getting the new adverting contracts and start increasing their revenues because there in no guarantee that restoring the time devoted to weather and local news will restore the revenues.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 6 15
No. of Words: 263 350
No. of Characters: 1220 1500
No. of Different Words: 118 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.027 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.639 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.441 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 80 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 72 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 43.833 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 23.334 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.499 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.905 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.22 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...late night show has cancelled is due to the the increase time in national news and decr...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...late night show has cancelled is due to the the increase time in national news and decr...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 55.5748502994 70% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 16.3942115768 18% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 2260.96107784 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 263.0 441.139720559 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71863117871 5.12650576532 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.56307096286 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46949320319 2.78398813304 89% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 204.123752495 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460076045627 0.468620217663 98% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 705.55239521 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 19.7664670659 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 22.8473053892 188% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.624043734 57.8364921388 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 206.833333333 119.503703932 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.8333333333 23.324526521 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 5.70786347227 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385145350671 0.218282227539 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177152264149 0.0743258471296 238% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958790107804 0.0701772020484 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195979638425 0.128457276422 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954093780254 0.0628817314937 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 14.3799401198 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 48.3550499002 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 12.197005988 155% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 98.500998004 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 11.1389221557 172% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.9071856287 160% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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