It is true that native people avoid to visit heritage sites and art galleries, which depicts the indigenous culture of their forefathers. This happening may have perpetuated owing to several reasons and hence seek relevant measures in order to convince them
With the glimpse of museums, people get acquainted with past culture but locals refuse to visit museums due to a variety of causes. Firstly there is no new thing in museums to see, people find it Boring to go to galleries, because it swallow a large chunk of their precious time. Secondly, Exorbitant amount of money is needed to buy high cost entry tickets . Moreover, residents have no thirst towards heritage sites as their childhood have spent surrounding that area, so they feel no quest to watch local sites
Some initiatives can take a big hand to curb the aforementioned menace. The Primary measure, it is onus of proverbial head of museums to organise festivals time- to- time, it can assist the museums which can assure proliferate the number of local visitors . To exemplify, 'The book of Past' museum in Brazil held exhibition after a short period time, it leads to upsurge visitors number. However, high authorities should offer free tickets or discounts on the weekends to fascinate natives.
To put in nutshell, I pen down by saying that although, this phenomenon occurs due to some precursors but the problem can be tackled by some appropriate ways.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid visiting'.
Suggestion: avoid visiting
It is true that native people avoid to visit heritage sites and art galleries, which...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...evant measures in order to convince them With the glimpse of museums, people get ...
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Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'swallows'?
Suggestion: swallows
...t Boring to go to galleries, because it swallow a large chunk of their precious time. S...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...is needed to buy high cost entry tickets . Moreover, residents have no thirst towa...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...proliferate the number of local visitors . To exemplify, The book of Past museum i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ree tickets or discounts on the weekends to fascinate natives. To put in nuts...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00840336134 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67109008126 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655462184874 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.5682327089 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.444444444 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197618866251 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668720865365 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494803077891 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10171346056 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280507380147 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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