Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and caused to helpless animals that are killed. All blood sports should be banned. Discuss the main arguments for this statement & give your opinion.
The animals are very crucial for our ecosystem. Nowadays, the blood sports have become extremely usual, which are responsible for the deaths of many animals. I agree with the notion that these sports, certainly, need to get banned in our society. Let us look at the essential arguments for this in the following paragraphs.
First of all, there are various blood games that are eminent in our nation. In villages, mostly the people organise the dog as well as hen fightings for their own entertainment. In some countries, the lion fightings are vastly famous for their personal earnings. Although, this is an illegal activity, but still human beings conduct such games to earn money, and kill many animal species. On the other hand, some people, like - Hindus, worship their religious animals. They treat them as their family members.
Therefore, self-awareness is substantial in this matter. Few human species do social donations these days for the safety of affected animals. Nevertheless, our society needs specific government based organisations, which spread information about the adverse effects of blood sporting. Moreover, the government should implement some stringent laws for this, and punish the individuals who defy those laws. In addition, the educated people should conduct a couple of seminars in their localities, to create awareness among the illiterate humans.
In conclusion, the blood sporting should be rigidly banned, because this is the major cause for the extinction of animals in the world. Both the government and the human beings are equally entitled to protect the animals from such cruel games. Thus, it is our job to make the world eco-friendly and keep all the creatures safe.
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- Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and caused to helpless animals that are killed. All blood sports should be banned. Discuss the main arguments for this 61
- Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and caused to helpless animals that are killed. All blood sports should be banned. Discuss the main arguments for this 87
- The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.IELTS 67
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Essay evaluation report
272 words are fine.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 275 350
No. of Characters: 1398 1500
No. of Different Words: 167 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.072 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.084 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.558 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 103 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 73 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.474 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.295 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.579 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.265 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.506 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.044 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32727272727 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71556464424 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647272727273 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2411199237 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3888888889 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2777777778 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38888888889 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282543067725 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753146461456 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083277804401 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172206212641 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564617057569 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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