Writing TASK 1
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
Give details of how you and your friends or famiy use the centre
Explain why the sports and leisure center is important for the local community
Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes.
Dear Sir,
I am Bala living in 3rd street, Bangalore. The Easwar Sport center is located quite close to our home. I would like write this letter to insist that you keep the sports center open. I will explain in details about the effects of keeping this sports open.
This sports center has been running for so long now I cant remember a time where my life was not associated with it. This is the place I met most of my friends in my locality. This place have more nostalgic memories of me playing football with my friends. Our gang was one of the first people to play football after it got refurbished as a grass courted ground. This will remain our home ground forever.
The ground is the place of many mid age walkers and joggers in the morning and in the late evening. We never had our own park in the locality. But the track circling the football ground served the purpose well.
If the center is closed then lot of people will have to do their morning walks/Jogs elsewhere. People might stop their healthy routines altogether incase this facility is closed down. This will effect the health and happyness index in the locality.
So keeping all the sentiments , concerns and love that people hold dear for this sports center , I insist on behalf of my locality to not to close the sports center. Please consider the request and do the needful. Awaiting your response.
Yours truly,
Balaprasanth P
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir, I am Bala living in 3rd street, Bangalor...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...about the effects of keeping this sports open. This sports center has been ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...effects of keeping this sports open. This sports center has been running for ...
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Line 7, column 55, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...nter has been running for so long now I cant remember a time where my life was not a...
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Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... met most of my friends in my locality. This place have more nostalgic memories of m...
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Line 7, column 346, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ball after it got refurbished as a grass courted ground. This will remain our hom...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ball ground served the purpose well. If the center is closed then lot of people...
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Line 13, column 195, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...this facility is closed down. This will effect the health and happyness index in the l...
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Line 17, column 30, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ity. So keeping all the sentiments , concerns and love that people hold dear...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... people hold dear for this sports center , I insist on behalf of my locality to no...
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Line 19, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... Awaiting your response. Yours truly, Balaprasanth P
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ponse. Yours truly, Balaprasanth P
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69322709163 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28000553101 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593625498008 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9884559679 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.0 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.2105263158 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57894736842 7.06120827912 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164134321569 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500484906372 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564681778938 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902136617089 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745973780236 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.0946893788 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.03 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.