Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional food and traditional ways of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
There is no doubt that food habits have been changed drastically in the last few years. Numerous workers or busy individuals find the processed food as the best solution for them during their tough day. Therefore, many of them think that conventional food will be ultimately disappeared. However, I wholeheartedly disagree with that and this essay will explore the reasons of my opinion in further detail.
To commence with, it’s irrefutable that the way of people living have a conspicuous influence on individuals’s diet selection. Firstly, plenty of workers have insufficient time during their duties to make their food, therefore, they resort to eat from fast food restaurant in order to save their time.
Nevertheless, traditional foods are unlikely to be vanished for several causes. First of all, it considers as a part of family connection in different civilizations. For instance, Al-Mansaf is a name of Jordanian traditional meal,. the main ingredients of it is rice and meat. Many households indeed, cook it during some big events such as wedding, graduation, and religious days where the whole family will be existed in it. Another example, is a roasted turkey dish that many families in the western areas cook it during occasion like Christmas to celebrate this day with their beloved ones.
In addition, the popularity of food shows have increased dramatically these days. Many TV channels specialize some programs that provide delicious and easy recipes for people. This move in fact, motivates lots of individuals to cook by themselves. Take the most famous Arabic chef, Mr.Moh Al-Zamel as an example. He has been offering many tasty recipes for over than 5 years through his page on Instagram. The way of his cooking has lured many individuals to follow him and cook a healthy food by themselves.
To sum up, changing of people life has impacted on their diet choices. Nonetheless, in my point of view, I strongly believe that conventional meals and the way of preparation it, will never be affected due to the mentioned causes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, therefore, as to, for instance, in addition, in fact, no doubt, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17857142857 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93792061687 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3639931801 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220811542988 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618841732148 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564772114441 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115892634824 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583156410153 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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