This bar chart compares the percentage of people doing physical exercise in terms of gender and age in Australia in 2010.
As is shown in the chart, there are six groups from the age of 15 and over, which can be divided into three types according to their features. To begin, men did more physical activity regularly than women in the group aging between 15 and 24, figuring at 52.8% and 47.7% respectively, in which men reached their peak proportion of all ages.
In the second type, including four groups from 25 to 64, they had an identical trend that women achieved much higher percentage in doing regular exercise than men, which can be noticeably seen in the group of age 35 to 44, and there were 52.5% of women while less than 40% (39.5) of men, which was also the lowest of men of all ages. In addition, the age of 45 to 55 witnessed women`s highest percentage at 53.3%, while the lowest emerges in age from 25 to 34 at 42.2%.
Finally, in the last type men and women were of almost the same percentage in the group of 65 and over, where there was only difference of 0.4 percentage.
To sum up, Australian women participated more physical activity regularly than men in 2010.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, second, so, while, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55092592593 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44748951049 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.9030667589 43.030603864 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.428571429 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8571428571 22.9334400587 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415269168771 0.215688989381 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.200217313833 0.103423049105 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773523295091 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239705582507 0.15604864568 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523685610106 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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