Healthy living has beacom a buzzword in recent years.it is true that in several nation's obesity has become persistanant issue which result in the deterioration of individual's health.therefore ,i am going to highlight the causes and solutions of this grave issue.
To begin with,In these days people are confronting many predicaments related to overweight .Firstly people are preferring to have sedentary lifestyle due to evolution of technology,as a result of which people don't need to move their physics as much as before.secondly people have comprehensively included themselfs in the work ,irrespective of thinking about their health.For instance these days people use vehicles such as cars and motobikes etc is also one of the most common cause of obesity.
Furthermore,the availability of non nutrious food at an economical price in comparison to organic food because of this deterioration of health is prevalent which result in serious problems like diabities,hypertention and so on.
However,to overcome with this hazard better initiatives at right time should be adopted by goverment .For example,by eastablish a law which set a limit to built fast food outlet at everyplace.Furtherance not only working mortals but also student should also be guide properly by gaints about negetive impact of junk food.
In addition to,promotion of public transport,good diet campaigns by goverment and incorporating more and more sports as well as physical activities are the main treatements and undoubtly a natural way to improve health.
To sum up ,fruitful outcome can only possible when people changes their personal choices and they will understand that everthing is associated with health weather it is money,happiness and so on
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 30.3222958057 158% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1373.03311258 107% => OK
No of words: 266.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51879699248 5.08290768461 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51281542882 2.5805825403 136% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 145.348785872 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669172932331 0.540411800872 124% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 419.366225166 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 21.2450331126 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.04152205 49.2860985944 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 244.666666667 110.228320801 222% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.3333333333 21.698381199 204% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 33.6666666667 7.06452816374 477% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 4.19205298013 596% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140834498171 0.272083759551 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598345232772 0.0996497079465 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033636221723 0.0662205650399 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0598345232772 0.162205337803 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033636221723 0.0443174109184 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.7 13.3589403974 200% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.36 53.8541721854 34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 5.55761589404 286% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.0289183223 196% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 12.2367328918 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.81 8.42419426049 128% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 63.6247240618 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 10.7273730684 298% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.498013245 187% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.2008830022 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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